DJ_WISE / CRUSH IT UP it needs...
it need to by more dynamic. use more progressions
it needs...
it need to by more dynamic. use more progressions
fix it
ok intro=way to long... akward change of sections... b section is really sweet...u came out of it nice... the straight 4th bass drum build up thing is kinda rediculously boring..... so fix that and extened it and ur solid...but the b section is nice shit
Thanks a bunch man. Soon as I get the chance I'll get on that. Thanks again for the tips.
...words
are those words, or just a filter overly used as percussion? well w/e i liked it... arpagiation was nice... need more progressions and a less abrupt ending.. the intro was fuckign sexy though
more progressions
great drums and voicings.... gets lil boring after a while... i suggest u incorporate some more progressions.. even ocatives would do wonders
summary
i like it and all...gave ya an ocho!... ever think bout deveating from that progression though, aside from transposing it slightly? it could birng peoples attention back into things, almost like when ur sweet ass megaman sounding melody/solo thingy happened...
idk just a way of giving the song to potential to be even longer .
mr scruff?
ummmm... idk if u planned it or not, but this song is just a loop from a mr. scruff song...
hehe ur lucky i love mr scruff....
errrrr... what is mr. scruff?
And truly, this is not a ripoff, I made this loop myself.
sexy loops, could use a lead melody
alright duder, some nice nice arpegiation going on, sexy string noise, seemed more darkwave than industrial in either the b or c sections. only thing i can really say is add a solo section or possibly an extremely juxtaposed bridge...something nuts liek that, or both. i'm totaly checking out the restof ur shit though dude
...gimme some reviews... i find them interesitng to read... we're sloppy but we know what we're doing...sorta
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